This Is Not a Brag Book.
I’ve read a lot of highly regarded celebrity memoirs, and it’s a rare one that focuses on the obvious success. Instead, they’re filled with tough childhoods and squalid conditions, pitfalls and insecurities, bouts of depression and failed relationships. You may be trying to write the perfect memoir, but to begin with nothing is perfect, and for sure no honest account of a life portrays a perfect person. Readers are drawn to vulnerability. Only a memoir that reveals an imperfect you is likely to keep readers engaged. Then they can root for you.
Challenges are built into many memoirs. As I mentioned in my last post, the inspiration for writing a memoir often comes from a tragedy, traumatic event or tough period in life. Abuse, addiction, disease and mental illness are common themes. But outside forces are one thing, and I’m not talking about those. Whether you’re writing about a hard life or a relatively easy one, the tale of how you dealt with each episode conveys elements of your humanity. Readers identify with that common thread that even with our unique gifts and limitations, we’re all so quintessentially human.
And yet the differences are what matter. You’re quirky, you have your own way of doing things, you like certain foods and dress the way you like to dress, and you have a few unusual hobbies or predilections. Your smile or gait or voice may be identical to your grandmother’s, but it’s unlike that of anyone else. I know all of this about you because this describes all of us. And this is what should stand out in your memoir.
Character development (yours)
A memoir’s narrative can read like the plot of a novel—suspenseful or funny or sad—and that’s probably been consuming the majority of your writing energy. Of course, you have to give readers a story, with pivots and crises, a beginning and ending. But a memoir highlights character development as well. What is your character, your essence? Where are the cracks? What scars are left but helped you become who you are, so familiar and unexpected all at the same time?
Along the way, it’s fine to share your achievements and times that make you proud of yourself. Be careful not to describe that in a boastful way. Maybe a successful outcome surprised even you! Or you expected to fail but somehow prevailed. Most of all, in your rise to the top, certainly you made mistakes. Write about those swings that missed. Recognize that luck may have played a role in your success.
If your memoir is about a singular, major life challenge, then part of the theme is that you overcame this hurdle. You probably are telling your story partly to reassure others that they, too, can overcome a similar situation. You may feel that you want to emphasize what worked for you, not all the goofs. But you’ll lose them that way. They have to identify with a winner to become one, and they can’t identify with a perfect score. So explain how you triumphed despite human frailties, not because of all your strengths.
Remember as you write to give a nod to any advantages you had, not only the barriers in your way. That shows humility. Describe your fear and doubts. Look at yourself from others’ points of view and think about what they’re seeing. Ultimately, a memoir is introspective. When you reveal your shortcomings, you prove you’ve done the work in your own mind before trying to explain yourself or help the next person.
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